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Wait! Is this in a book?! The pages look like they've been scanned like the manga I read online! If so, that it SO cool! OwO

"Everybody of the train, this instant (or right now)" would work really well for the first part (or so I believe).

And just the last part: "In the doctor's mind, they don't consider the patients as humans, but as test subjects" would be easier to read.

The rest is really good! ^w^ I like how you centered the house. It's very eerie. >w<